This is a post of our National sport for our utopia...
but what does utopia mean? a utopia is basically like a perfect place were every one wants to live,
its based on your ideas on what a perfect place would look like.
In class we have to make our own utopia. These are the national sports for our utopia.
( I worked on this with a friend )
Hi Lexie,
ReplyDeleteYour work is looking really good but there a a few things that you need to cheek.
Next time you might want to cheek if what you are writing makes sense, because I got a little confused and some parts. If you revise and edit I think that your work will be amazing. :)
Hi kaylee thanks for your feed back really helpfull :)
DeleteKia Ora Lexie
ReplyDeleteMy name is Allie, and I will be one of the people blogging with you this summer for the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed reading your slides about sports in your country. I like the look of the water tennis. I think this is a very interesting idea.
We are thrilled that you've registered for the Summer Learning Journey with us. I know it can sometimes be tricky to get started. I have included a link to the week one activities, but remember, you can do them in any order! Check out the activities on our website, and then post your responses to the activities here on your blog site.
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities/week-one
I am so excited to read all of your posts!
Cheers,
Allie :)
Kia ora Lexie I go to Kawakawa Primary school I am a year 8. I like your work because you added photos and a lot of information about national sports.Maybe next time you should add another color to your slide.Did it take long to find all of the information?if you want you can look at my blog
ReplyDeletehttp://kpsdarvayet.blogspot.co.nz/.BYE : )
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DeleteHi darvaye thanks for the feed back, it did take a long time to find all the info :)
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